Monday, 1 June 2015

Revised script

I have revised my script because it was too long, so now it should be able to fit the 30 seconds during narration. It meant I also needed to cut a few scenes back:

Narration:
(scene of hands stamping paper) subtitles: year - 1971

Voice: The Buzludzha monument was founded to commemorate ten years since the formation of the local socialist regime

(scene of hands building monument, pans around) subtitles: year - 1974

Voice: Over six thousand people constructed it, and it cost fourteen million levs to build

(camera turns around star) subtitles: year - 1977

Voice: The tower’s star is lit, honoring sixty years since the great October revolution

(skip to opening day scene with crowd) subtitles: August 1981

Voice: thousands of people attended the opening of the monument.

(people walk up to building for a couple of seconds – layered and then ripped flag is seen – doorway shot) subtitles: year - 1989

Voice: Bulgaria’s communist party dissolves, the building no longer serves a purpose.

(shows interior roof/floor/walls decaying - light fading?) subtitles: 1995-1996 monument decays, stripped by vandals

(establishing silhouette shot of building at night, light goes out)

Voice: Neglect now leaves this ‘Pantheon of Bulgaria,’ to the elements.




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